Is it OK with YOu

Heavenz

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Greetings dear sis's

I was wondering if it is OK with you if I try to write

HOW DO I FEEL

in English for sure

and I'd love to hear your comments

and would have a great honor to read your own feelings too

I'm here asking for your permission

Million thanks

 

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السكوت علامه الرضا...

ان شاء الله راح انزلكم شي الليله ...واتمنى اشوف تعليقاتكم و نقدكم البناء....
 

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شكرا لتشجيعكم...ابي منكم التعليق بكل امانه وابي تكتبون ....مشاعركم لانها راح تكون كلمات صادقة ...

وراح نتعلم من بعض ...

هذي اول مشاركة ....بعنوان



I am free




As I grew up...I though that life is a beautiful picture

one can add colours to his life as one wishes

can add or remove elements as one desires




upon that....I have painted one for myself

I couldn't wait to live that lovely dream of mine

As I grew up ...I lived that image ....in my mind


My waiting prolonged

moments slept a way ......left out with one fact

MY life , my happiness and my dreams are within me

I shall wait no more

Take life as it is

live it

with

an open heart

and a peaceful mind


I shall not fight....anymore

I am ready to serender

and take it as is


for I have a free spirit and mind


above the limits of this life




 

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وطن النهار
amazingly beautiful and truthful !
Gurl You are pretty talanted I can tell ;p
and Please do write more .. i'm really interested​
 

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im touched 2
i think u described my life 2
ive always sing
"another day another night i won't give up without a fight"
:)
we r waitin 4 u
 

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im touched 2
i think u described my life 2
ive always sing
"another day another night i won't give up without a fight"
:)
we r waitin 4 u



That is a great honor


Don't wait 4 me

please share

let's listen to your heart


Peace
 

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I used to have a great pleasure in watching

windows in large buildings.....thinking about the people in their

asking myself....what's like to have a perfect life

What's it like to live a dream you had from childhood

many questions...pass my mind

I keep gazing till someone at those windows ....pulls the curtain

then I know the show is off

and a dream has vanished




Then I wonder, when Shall be my turn

I've waiting for a long time for this

I want to be inside

and look through those windows

to the outer world

To belong

To be safe

To rest in peace
 

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Heavenz
That is one of the most powerful feelings

I was really taken


and I'm waiting for more
 

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Heavenz
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I will try to write about this pic


It is known that waiting for something you longed for is so hard


and might be even killing


But now I know


that waiting for no one or nothing to happen



My wings were cut along time ago



My feathers failed even to fly far away in the sky



IT is dark I can't take one more step



I am still in the middle of nowhere waiting



for Emptiness




even harder



Watching most of your life slipping away from your hands



you can't do anything about it



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Heavenz
there are a few mistakes

please don't hesitate to point them out