new game let's make fun !!

[t@mtoom@h]

hi girls
how are you ? hope you interested your summer ?
ok i want to explane the game
the game is
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i will talk about myself and what i done in this summer and what is the worste thing i hate it in this summer
and anouther one comment about my little paragraph and correct my mistaces
and say a little paragraph and another one correct .... atc
ok ?





e7m e7m i will start


HI everybody iam tamtooma el7lwa and i'm from saudia arabia iam 17 years old i want to say that i don't know english very well iam trying to improve my language and my vacation is so bored iam always in my home and nothing to do .sometimes i read a book or put makeup in my face then i feel so lazy to remove it hhhhhhhhh but i enjoy putting makeup mmmm what else i did in this vacation mmmmm iam thinking know :gr4uu:what i did
looool
yeah i go shopping i like to go shopes and pay some t.shirts and makeup

mmmmmmm yeah i want to tell everybody hope you enjoy the game :eh_s(6):

yeah and this is my first time here in this section :ggdw:



yalla iam waiting the comment and the little paragraph for all

 

[مــلائكيه]

Hello there

?I'm good what about you

Now , Do I write about myself or correct your paragraph mistakes ?

m8afla shwaaay esme7elii lol

 

[الغيلم]

i didnt want to read this game and carry on without any reply

soo this vacation was boring ........ but am waiting for ramadan 3sa rby ybal`3na yah

thanks for this game ,,,, good luck

c ya

 

[t@mtoom@h]

heeey lovely two girls
no i mean correct my paragraph and write a pargraph from you and anouther one do the same
understood ?
and thanks for making me feel happy to comment
but i want more girls

 

[مــلائكيه]

Okay

am gonna correct your paragraph

mmmm let's see ,,


the first mistake was

saudia arabia


and it should be

Saudi Arabia


Mistake number 2

iam always in my home

at my home not in


number 3

put makeup in my face

Wearing make-up

again the same mistake
putting makeup

Wearing make-up

mistake num 4

pay

buy



My turn




About my summer vacation it was kinda good
nothing entersting the usually places
, malls , entertaiment places
oh yea one orphan party lol
and aloooot of hospital appoitment k7 k7 3ayooz



Who's next :eh_s(3):

 

[الغيلم]

entersting

intresting

appointment

these are your mistakes